Wednesday, August 31, 2016

General Outros Retrospective

Well, I couldn't just leave it, could I?  Three years of work, and then I fuck around on the ending?  Come on.  I'm not that big of an asshole.  Hopefully there's no typographical errors on these, because I am not checking. 


So these are the endings to the meta-narrative, which leads directly into Nyar's stories.  Or maybe not.  Kinda-sorta.  Well, whatever.  They're my versions of Nyar's stories.  Basically, this is the viewpoint of the ground pounding "sista", who is far away from the Temples, but is still a part of the whole program.  Most Lilians would get their shots and gummies through the Temple proper.  I guess I like that I was able to wrap things up, although I wrapped them up in like, 4500 characters. 

The big thing here, was bringing all of the little meta-narrative elements, with Medea Circe, and the editor, and the Ubechido, and everything else, and then slamming their round peg, into the square hole, that is my meta-narrative for this project.  I didn't specifically pick the specials that are going in the best of, so it isn't really a best of, but hey, whatever.  The meta-narrative was never going to make sense.  At least it's there though, right? 


So next up is... Nothing!  Probably.  If I start writing 1D stories in this world, or working on LRLB Kufuku again, maybe I'll come back, but we'll have to see about that.

If I don't come back, thanks for all the support, the ideas, the pageviews, and the comments.  Even the crazy/stupid comments.  It's always nice to know that people are enjoying your work.  By the time this goes out on the chans, I should have updated the Omnibus.  If you haven't gotten it, now would be the time.  I'm not sure whether I'll be in a position to update the links, if they go down.

Hopefully you guys enjoyed this ride as much as I have.  For those of you who haven't, just remember, it's a story.  

General Outros

 This is me basically me finishing up the meta-narrative, to close out this project entirely.


178aicha - By now, you should understand the general operation of The Grove.  While that particular house of revolution *is* quite special, it is in no way unique.  The vast majority of our operations, around the world, are dependent upon other operations, in other parts of the world.  Some of our detractors, in the Pagan Maternalist sphere, accuse us of being little more than "Northwestern Granola Munchers".  In the laity, perhaps this criticism holds water.  But among our cadre and clergy, this is a ridiculous notion.  Our sisters come from around the world, and in fact, some of our most fervent and *important* revolutionaries lie in the global south, far away from the erotic hubs that Eugene, Portland, Malmo, and Tokyo represent.  Did you know that 86 percent of our complex pharmaceuticals come from Basra?  And the raw materials for their synthesis, come from Bankok.  Much of the money that fuels the Portland Temple is gained through imports originating in Yangon.  We say all that, to say this.  Don't ever take your sisters for granted, and don't make wild assumptions, based on where they are, or where they come from.  There's a decent chance, that they've been serving Our Goddess for longer, and with more vigor, than you have.  

kuntakinteklimax - Sisters, we have reached a magnanimous day, in our revolution.  All of us have been waiting, patiently and eagerly, for our greatest scientific mind, Medea Circe, to conclude her research, into the genetic codes of our little ones, and ourselves.  She has promised us a world of beauty and joy, a world where our babies never have to grow up, and a world where *we* are perfected, and transformed into a reflection of Our Goddess' mercy and love.  I am quite pleased to announce, that this glorious day no longer rests in our prayers, and dreams.  It is *here*, sisters!  Revolution is at hand!  The uprising is not confined to our Cells, Circles, and Temples either.  Our Goddess made us a promise, that when we were ready, that all barriers to our ascension, would be removed.  The greatest barrier of all, is Jehovans, and whether you like it or not, that barrier *will* be removed.  Consider bathtime, with your lover.  Does he always *want* to get in the tub?  Even the most obedient boys sometimes have to be carried in, so that they can be washed clean, inside and out.  With gentle hands, you calmly caress, working in all that luscious lather, even as he pouts and moans, or, if he's *much* younger, thrashes around, and throws a tantrum.  But he must get clean, and *you* are the best woman for the job.  You continue your work, unabated, because you *know* how important it is, for him to be nice and squeaky clean.  When it's all over, everyone is better off for it, and him, most of all.  There will be difficulties, in the coming months, and try as we might, there *may* not be the usual issue of Bounty, in the mail for you next cycle.  For this reason, we've put together a nice collection of fun, sexy, and often quite meaningful stories, to tide you over.  We've also included a copy of The Gospel, just in case you didn't have one handy, along with some information, about getting in contact with us, during and after the initial phases of the revolution.  As always, sisters, stay safe, stay secret, and stay *sexy*!

secgen - Blessings upon you, dear sisters.  Most of you, being so far away from the Regional Temple system, are seeing me for the first time.  I'm not quite as photogenic, or as... pleasing, to the boys, as many of the other clergy.  I'm actually quite shy, in fact.  Even at the orgies, I'll usually only be with two or three of the boys.  But rest assured, I *am* your sister, and in fact, much of what you've learned over the years, from the official texts and magazines, has been collated, curated, and approved, by myself.  My name is Maple Turner, and I'm actually the General Secretary, of the Temple Congress.  That lady with the gavel, on that Temple TV channel that you never watched?  That's me!  But let's get to business.  Yes, it's true.  Medea Circe has finished her research, and has distributed the fruits of her labor, through the usual channels, to Temples worldwide.  Included in this month's package, you will find a number of what appear to be inkpens, corresponding to the amount of people you have listed as local practitioners, in your area.  Those are syrettes, and they contain a compound that will perfect you, both mentally, and physically, in the eyes of Our Goddess.  They will also prevent your young lover, from growing past the outward appearance of around 10, or 12.  I highly suggest that you use these syrettes, but of much, much, *much* greater importance, are the chewable gummies, that have been included, as well.  Our Goddess' method of purifying the earth, is exactly what you think it is, and if true believers are saved through faith, it's faith in the gummies, that their command structure, has provided to them.  One gummy per person, single dose, Lilians and Pagan Maternalists *only*.  You are building your local cadre for the extended revolution here, sister.  Don't fill it with troublemakers.  If you're in a region, or a situation, where you aren't confident in your long-term (2-3 month) sustinance, get to a Temple, by whatever means are available.  If you're on a family farm, or something equally sustainable, you're better off staying there, for now.  Don't worry about looters, the revolution will be sudden, short, and thorough.  If you're staying home, tune the included radio to XXXXX (9500kHz) at 0000 hours, every night, after the revolution becomes most obvious.  Follow the instructions *exactly*.  These coming days will be trying for us all, from the highest preistess, to the lowest laywoman.  But united under the Mantle of Our Mother, we *will* perservere, and we *will* bring revolution, right to Jehovah's doorstep!

Living Gospel Retrospective and General Retrospective

Well, I guess I ran out of time.  There were a lot of things that I wanted to do for this project, but, oh well.  I might come back to this at some point, or I might not.  I guess we'll see.  It's not like I haven't ever fucked off for months on end, though.  I feel like this is as good a sendoff as any, though.  I really like the way this one came out.  It's either poetic, or I'm pretentious.  Probably the second one.


At any rate, like I said, I really dig how this came out.  It's very tight, somewhat by design, but somewhat by luck.  It was supposed to be 10 pages, but when I got to the end, it just looked so good (to me) that I decided against taking it further.  I like that this kind of wound up being something akin to the Position Pamphlet, but with a much tighter, and more theological focus.  It also helps that it's short. 

One of the things that I really liked, was that I was largely able to fill out the lines fully, and separate everything into nice, neat, little blocks.  It wasn't always perfect, but it often did end up looking pretty decent, I think.  The first lines at least, are generally formatted decently well. 

I really love the pictures that I used here.  The girl is super fun looking, and she's kind of the archetype, of what a Lilian is "supposed" to look like.  Maybe with a bigger ass, but she's definitely got that nice hourglass figure.  Huge tits are obviously a plus.  What I really like is how expressive she's drawn.  The artists gave her a lot of character.  Some nice outfits, too.


So.  This is pretty much it, as far as the project goes.  I miiiiiiiight come back to do some of the little things, that I was planning on doing, or I might not.  Not sure.  I'm kind of emotionally invested in ending the project, at this point.  The shuffling stuff around in the omnibus will happen, that's easy.  The other stuff probably doesn't really need done, at the end of the day.  We'll see, though.  

Living Gospel

This is the Living Gospel pamphlet.  It essentially combines and condenses elements of the Position Pamphlet and Timid Boys Pamphlet, into a single package. 



183_0012 - The Living Gospel.  When Mother Sophia confirmed her first few Nuns, that was what she called us.  The Living Gospel, and the Living Goddess.  Lilith lives within all of her devotees, in the sacred wombs of her daughters, and in the immaculate hearts of her sons.  But as ladies, we have a special role, in her revolution.  We represent her most direct representatives, on this Earth, and to her boys.  Just as they drink from our plentiful bosoms, they also are nourished, by gentle advices.  *We* are the Gospel, and *we* are the Goddess, as far as they are concerned.  Our boys will always most readily come to know their goddess through us, her representatives.  The word itself is important, but that word must also become flesh, and make its dwelling among our faithful brothers and sons, for them to truly understand revolution.  When you take a beautiful young boy as your bonded student, you also take on a very special role, in his theological life.  You *become* his goddess, and as much as your training should be from the text, it should also be from the heart.

199_0028 - Our Prophet often spoke quite fondly, of a "cult of the breast", that had cropped up among our boys.  In the Gospel, Our Goddess often relates the act of nursing a child, to the pedagogical labor, that she has taken over the centuries.  But even without the poignant act of drinking from one's goddess, the bosom, soft and warm, has always been a place of special reverence, for our boys.  It is a place of sanctuary, for a sobbing son, as he burrows in, cradled by your loving arms.  It is a place of relaxation, for a pooped-out pupil, reclining into the safety, of your embrace.  It is a place of pleasure, for an eager admirer, as he thrusts between your cleavage, howling with delight, when he finally witnesses Our Goddess, and coats your collar with his cream.  The cult of the breast will always be the first stop, on your bonded student's journey, towards his place in our cadre.  Make sure to give him ample time, to explore and enjoy your ample bust. 

236_0065 - One of the most special and emblematic symbols of Our Goddess' love, is the nursing worship position.  This specific position, incorporates every element of Lilith's adoration for her little ones.  The boy lays in the warmth and comfort of his goddess' lap, drinking from her bountiful breast.  He pleasures her with his tongue, and fingers, and she, in turn, exchanges that pleasure, with her own stroking caress.  But unique to this practice, is the spiritual joy, and unity, of the earthly representative, with her bonded student, and slave.  With her free hand, The Goddess cradles her baby's head, stroking his soft hair, and gazing down, into his loving and trusting eyes.  The two of them share a special love, not as spiritually intense as that of oral worship, or as viscerally pleasing, as dual worship, but important, nonetheless.  As our boy stares up at his goddess, and approaches his pleasure, his hips bucking into her loving grasp, and his tongue lashing fervently, at her nourishing nipple, their spiritual eyes make contact, and they become as one, in a way that is grounded, personal, and *very* memorable.

277_0106 - As a nun, bonded to a student, you are responsible for your charge's sexual education.  But this education doesn't begin and end with teaching him to lick, or training up his stamina.  A very important role of any nun, but especially a bonded one, is to teach her lovely little student, how to better worship, when he's all alone, and thinking of his goddess.  Our Mother loves novelty, and diversity, in the erotic games of her children, and when she sees a boy, passionately pumping, calling out her name, as he accepts her word, it pleasures her immensely.  But what pleases her even more, is the image of a curious little lover, playfully teasing a new, or recently discovered bliss button.  Don't ever think that your sexy students are just waiting around for *you* to come over and play.  They often have very active solo sex lives, and this should be encouraged, by you.  The best way to keep them stroking, is to constantly be opening new doors, and pathways of arousal, in their horny little hearts. 

241_0070 - Easily the most overhyped, and excessively discussed element of a boy's sexual education, is teaching him about pussy.  Yes, it is important.  Yes, he'll be spending a lot of time down there.  Yes, he *needs* to know these things.  Too often, however, we get so wrapped up in the training aspect of it all, that we forget the exploration!  We forget how to just lay back, and let these boys have fun!  There is certainly a time for serious training, but there is also a time for simple play.  Our Goddess, in her Gospel, has written at length about the joy of letting a kittenish young lover frolic between her thighs, poking and prodding, giggling sweetly, as he spreads her open, and moaning lightly, as his coquettish tongue tests the waters, before diving in, and worshiping fully.  When showing *your* boys the 'nice spread', you should hold them back a bit, from doing what they'd normally do.  Give them an opportunity to play, with no expectations, and no demands.  You'll soon find that his adorable curiosity will make a comeback, when it's permitted to. 

268_0097 - There's a time for play, but there's also a time for practice.  Oral worship truly *is* one of the most important elements of our faith, and it's often the starting point, for another crucial matter.  Female Domination.  Our Goddess loves her little ones, and that love is often expressed, through her maternally protective edicts.  We, as clergy and cadre, *must* take stewardship over our beloved brothers in faith.  There are a great number of methods with which we express this unique adoration, but one of the most basic, and encompassing, is the practice of "Queening".  Unlike other oral worship positions, this one is quite firmly female dominant.  It is quite outwardly harsh.  There is often little or no opportunity for the boy to move around, or stop licking.  Any solo-worship can be quickly stopped.  Even if his tongue relents, the mistress is quite free to rub herself off on his lips, or even his nose.  Lastly, and quite brutally, his spiritual eye is misaligned, with his goddess' sacred womb.  But these factors belie a unique comfort, for our boys.  Beneath their mistress, and nestled into the core of her femininity, they can take solace, in their own helplessness.  Delivered from the shackles of expectation, and demand, they can truly allow their devotion and love, to flow freely. 

226_0055 - Anyone who's *really* read The Gospel, knows that Our Goddess' focus on oral worship is nowhere near one sided.  Entire books have been devoted to the fondness that she's shown towards fellating her young devotees.  This special love has often been misunderstood, especially in the Jehovan world, as being male-dominant, or patriarchal.  As revolutionaries, however, we must strive to understand Our Goddess, and her desires.  Just as you encouraged your student to playfully explore and experiment with your snatch, you shouldn't be rushing to pleasures with him, either.  Learn his length!  Every throb, and twitch, can tell you something new about his unique sexuality, and his adorable little gasps and moans, can tell you even more.  As his goddess, you should savor his shaft, planting warm, loving kisses up and down, enjoying the taste of his tantalizing tip, and even relishing in his special scent.  Squeeze his hands tight, as he explodes down your throat, and blow his little mind, as you swallow each and every succulent spurt!

330_0159 - A large number of Priestesses and Nuns, over the years, have tried to quantify the importance of each individual element of a boy's sexual education.  More spiritually minded sisters point to Solo Worship as the most important.  Many of our Defense Industry sisters consider BDSM to be most crucial.  Some venerate Oral Worship, while other place Group Sex in that most cherished place.  Personally, though, I consider the humble act of mounting your charge, to be the greatest and most meaningful expression of Our Goddess' love, and so, it should always be the highlight of your training.  Connected at the hip, quite literally, bouncing up and down on his stiffness, lacing your fingers in his, and looking down at his pleasured little face, knowing, for a fact, that he's gazing up at the same, beautiful expression of lustful abandon.  You slam yourself down, again and again, and he slides so gracefully within you.  You lean down to kiss him, gripping him tightly, as he squeals and shrieks, filling you with his seed.  All he can see, feel, touch, or taste, is Goddess.  His Goddess.  The Living Goddess, and The Living Gospel. 

Sunday, August 28, 2016

Big Bone for the Crone Zone Outro Retrospective

I'm actually kind of glad I waited on this one.  BH2 actually released the outro picture today, and I wasn't originally going to do an outro.  It was just going to end with them kind of looping back to that opener, with the two boys, the mom, and the blonde lady.


It's kind of nice to finally let the boys be a little dommier, for once.  I never write them that way, but it's actually kind of fun.  It's even more fun, when both of the partners are very aggressive in their desires, which I think most of the characters here are, aside from maybe Ceciliana, or whatever I named that younger blonde girl.

I tried to make these characters a little more interesting, from a meta-narrative storyline perspective, since they're in such a weird little love triangle, where they all know that they're all fucking other people, and they kind of like it, but they kind of don't, but then, they deal with it, by fucking other people really hard....

It's an interesting dynamic.  Or maybe not.  But it is a dynamic, and it's not just the same femdom formulaic stuff that I've been pushing out for the past 2 to 3 years. 

One thing that I really liked writing, was the whole thing about the boys being used as a type of status symbol, by the women.  From the parade of acolytes in Sacramento, to Nicole's little walk of pride, in the bar, and probably her banshee screams, as well, there's very much an undercurrent of one-upsmanship among some of the wealthier Lilian women, and the Acolytes are a huge part of that.  They're like trophy boys.  I dig it.

This one was kinda light on actual sex, since the first page is literal foreplay, and then the second one, yes, is a very straightforward (and hopefully intense) sex scene, but then the last page is kind of just Nicole and Sugarvine taking pictures of each other, so that he can use them in their blackmail games later.  Then there's the outro, which is pretty much not sexual at all, and just giving these characters (that I really like) a happy ending.  I think this closes out really well.  That bit about love being spelled time, by the way, came from Imperium, or as it's better known, "Harry Potter and the Final Solution", or as I like to call it, "should have been a fucking miniseries instead".  It was okay.  6.5/10.


So what's next?  Well, whatever I'm going to do, I pretty much have to do it fast, because September 1st is it, for this project.  That's 4 days, which could theoretically be 30 or 40 pages, but then, it could also be like, 6.

So let's see.  What do I need to do? 

Well first and foremost, I need to put together the intros and outros for the magazine best-of, where I'm going to be putting all of the random magazine style sex narratives, that just didn't make it into the magazines proper.  Maybe I'll frame them as being local stories, that were in the localized versions of some of the magazines, but not in the global ones. 

The Priestess guide probably needs an outro, so I can finally close out Lilian Booty Queens.  That one never really got as far as I'd wanted it to, but I think it came out reasonably well.  It does need an outro, though.

The random grimoire pages need to go somewhere, although I'm really not sure what I'm going to do with them.  They might end up in the best of pamphlet. 

I need to do something with the advertisements.  Either give them a cover page, or put them in with the normal magazines, in between the specials.  Something needs to be done with those. 

So that's what needs to be done, but most of that can be done in a single day.  What do I want to do?

I definitely want to at least do a 6-10 pager on the Ubechidos.  They're a fucking huge part of the meta-narrative, and I want to use them to explain some of the deeper history of Lilith herself. 

I kinda want to do something with the large breasted tutor girl, probably another 10 pager, and it'll be about how Nuns can teach the gospel with more fervor, and tie the lessons in with sex. 

If it is in any way possible to do something about the Lilian Defense Industry with Pinknoise's /ss/ in the APC set, I'd like to do a 10 pager for that. 

There's also a 10 pager on coven or minor temple life that I could do, although it's a little lower on the list, since it's essentially just a carbon copy of the sex-ed pamphlet. 

So we'll see what gets done, and what doesn't get done.  I'll probably be doing at least the stuff that needs to be done, so expect to see a lot of meta-narrative.  I'm thinking that I really want to bring back the Ubechidos too, somehow, so kinda expect that one, as well.  The other stuff will have to depend on how busy I am in these next 4 days.  I really do have a lot of shit to take care of. 

Big Bone for the Crone Zone Outro

This is the much awaited outro for Crone Zone.  It covers Sugarvine's Monterey story, and closes out the overall meta-narrative, of Sugarvine, Acacia, and Broadleaf's love triangle. 


Blackmail is her only vice
But she does it super nice
Only plays with paid-off boys
Uses them as blackmail toys


lhboldiebar - My last client of the trip was actually our general patron, Nicole.  She paid for our gas, and food.  She also booked our cabin, in Monterey.  She's a huge fan of my work, and she's got *all* of my CDs.  I was really excited to meet her, actually!  I actually do like the whole "seduction and blackmail" fantasy, and when I asked Nicole what *exactly* she was after, she just said, "Surprise me!"  After fucking Acacia goodbye for the day, I headed off to the bar, where Nicole was sitting, enjoying one of the aphrodisiacal mixed drinks, that the local Nuns had dreamed up.  I ordered myself a Boulder Bubble, and the two of us just sat across the bar for a few moments, eyefucking one another and imagining all the dirty things we'd be getting up to, later that evening.  Or rather, later that day, since I don't think Nicole was very interested in waiting around.  I sidled up to her at the bar, calling up all of my past training, to play the suave, smooth talking, young libertine.  I leaned in close, blowing hot, lychee-scented breaths in her ear, as I whispered all the dirtiest fantasies, my fingertips dancing over her smooth neck, down her delightfully perky tits, to rest just over her well manicured bush.  All eyes were on us as we sauntered off together, and I think Nicole got off on the envious glances of the women mulling around the bar, at noon, on a workday. 

lhboldiebed01 - By the time we got up to Nicole's suite, the two of us were out of our minds, with lust.  I'd spent most of the elevator ride glued to her gash, lapping up her sweet juices, as they flooded out all over my face, and tongue.  I barely even remember what I did when we got through the door.  I distinctly remember whipping her pumps across the room, to lick up and down her tantalizing toes, my cock bobbing and thrusting into her thighs and ass, smearing trails of silvery precum all over her.  Soon enough, though, she was wrapping those kissable calves and lickable legs around my waist, to pull me into her.  I'm pretty sure they could hear her hollering from outside, when I slammed my shaft into her wetness, pinching her turgid nipples hard, and enjoying the response, as she leaned back to scream some more, and gripped my pole even tighter.  When I started to get that familiar tunnel vision, all I could do was hold tight, to Nicole's juicy thigh, as my instincts took over, and I stabbed into her again and again, the rhythms of her undulations, drawing me deeper and deeper in, as I quickly approached my own pleasure.  With a final thrust, and an embarrassingly strange growling noise, I rammed myself as deep as I could, doubling over, to spread Nicole open even wider, and planted my lips firmly to her inner thigh, sucking and biting, as I shot my seed deep inside, marking her in two, very special ways. 

lhboldiebed02 - We kind of collapsed into each other after that first fuck, our primal energy and lust fading quickly, after the fun subsided.  We snuggled together for a while, basking in the Monterey sun, on the plush, soft, bed.  They really do splurge on the furnishings, at Lilian resorts!  Soon enough, though, our fingers found themselves unlacing, and dipping between each other's thighs.  Suddenly, Nicole stopped, hopping up, as if she'd just remembered something important.  She zipped around the room, collecting her shoes and other clothes, which was slightly disappointing, until she stopped at her bag, and pulled out some toys, and the smallest digicam that I'd ever seen.  Quickly figuring out what Nicole was up to, I got myself dressed as well, and struck a few sexy poses, so she could test the lighting.  It didn't take long, before I was giving her a teasing little strip show, and I couldn't help but giggling a bit, as her horny, trembling, fingers fumbled with her expensive camera, as she changed the memory sticks.  Once I was nice and nude, it was Nicole's turn.  I made sure to get my small, boyish, hands, and smooth little jailbait shaft in every shot.  Whether it was my slim fingers wrapped around the base of her dildo, or those same fingers balled up into a fist, with my underage tip spurting rivulets of hot jizz all over her tits, tummy, and face, it was pretty obvious, to anyone seeing those pictures, all the devilish debauchery that Nicole and I had enjoyed.  A couple of saucier scenes, with my "hole brother" Broadleaf, later in the evening, ensured that Nicole and I would have enough blackmail fetish material, to keep her hot and horny, for weeks!

darkhairairplane - Since our trip to Monterey, Broadleaf and I have started to fix our relationship up, a bit.  We're more playful with each other, and since Sugarvine has started to get more into the custom recording side of things, I'm spending a lot more time at home, in our studio.  There, I can always get little Broadleaf on my lap, or between my thighs, to enjoy some quality time with mommy, while she's hard at work.  His little inspirations help us to write, and he's even found his place in our recordings, playing off of Sugarvine's "bad boy" persona, with his own sweet encouragements.  Taking my baby on outreach was definitely a risk, and it *did* cost a little extra, but you know how our little ones spell love? "T-I-M-E".

Friday, August 26, 2016

Night Journey Ritual Retrospective

So you'd think I'd get it by now.  When you've got writers block, and you can't get a narrative done, don't let it sit on your other workspace for days, hoping that it'll all magically start making sense.  Do something else. 


I've been sitting on this prewrite for a while now, months or years, at this point.  I never really knew exactly what I wanted to do with it, but since I've got something to the tune of like, 5 days to finish all this shit up, it's now or never time.  So I decided to just crank this bitch out, and surprise surprise, I ended up getting the whole thing done and dusted, in only a few hours.  It's almost like I'm really interested in theology, or something. 

I really, really, quite genuinely love the way that this came out, and the way that the Night Journey ritual kind of gives each participant their special time in the sun.  Making rituals really is fun, and I think these are pretty fun for you guys to read, as well.  But anyway, I like the way that the girl always has something to do, in the ritual, and while she's kind of playing second fiddle (or backup, maybe?) to the Nun, she's always at least in the scene, and doing something.  I think putting her in the text of the scene really added a lot of depth to the narrative, and to the overall story of this ritual. 
It really is all about her, in the end.  If you notice, there's always this element of her getting kind of built up, where the Nun is fucking all of these boys, but she's just sitting on the sidelines, getting herself off.  She's being denied at first, but the Nun always lets her off the leash, at some point. 

Another thing that I like, is that this ritual actually did end up having 3 separate blocks, which was something that I was trying to do with the other one, the one with the 2 boys, but I ended up not really making that one happen.  I got it down, though, in this one.

One thing that I kinda sorta wanted to do, but didn't end up doing, is to have a little outro page, that shows the five of them walking back, and carrying different packages, that are essentially supposed to be drugs, that they're carting back to the Temple, because the shrines are essentially cover for dope labs.  I wanted to do that, but in the end, I liked the outro that I had, and I didn't want this to end up going on for too long, or getting too off track.  I built a tight little product here, and I didn't want to fuck that up. 


So next up, if I can get over my writer's block, is the finale of Crone Zone.  If I can't get over my writer's block, it'll be something else.  Either way, expect more content.